I’ve just started this screenplay. It’s called Morons (it’s PDF format, that way the formatting doesn’t get all screwy).
Any feedback for this would be great. What do you think should happen next? Any ideas for other scenes? Other characters I could add? Anything I can do to make it funnier? Run smoother? Anything will help, and if this ends up getting made I’ll make sure you get a credit even if it doesn’t make the final cut.